These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays there are a variety of products on the shelves of the shops. Some people prefer to buy organic
food
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because of it is healthier
food
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. It is argued by others people who think it is too expensive. In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
is more reasonable to eat healthy
food
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despite the higher price.
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main causes
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the main causes
of buying organic
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.
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of all conventionally produced
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often includes harmful things which can lead to over-weight and
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health
problems.
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research has shown us that people who prefer to eat conventional
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suffer from obesity 5 times more likely than people who consume organic
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of all currently the majority of people try to lead
healthy life
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healthy lives
a healthy life
. It is not argued that organic
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helps people to get good-quality
nutrition which
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nutrition, which
includes all necessary vitamins and proteins. That
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component
allow
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allows
people saving straight and being healthy.
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A third
of all it is supported by many governments having health life.
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are
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a lot of advertisements on the TV, which inspire us to buy more organic
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even though the high price. Many people follow it and spend more money buying
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kind of
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.
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instance my
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instance, my
grandmother got used to believing the advertisement and she tend to watch TV a lot.
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Therefore if
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Therefore, if
TV shows that healthy people have to eat more organic
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, she goes to the shop and purchase
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food
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without looking at the price. In conclusion, it is important to buy healthy
food
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according to its quality and influence on people`s health and shape.
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