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ESSAY : 2 – CHILDREN ARE FACING MORE PRESSURE NOWADAYS ACADEMIC, SOCIAL AND COMMERCIAL PERSPECTIVES. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES OF THESE PRESSURES AND WHAT MEASURES SHOULD BE TAKEN TO REDUCE THESE PRESSURE?

#children #pressure #perspectives #pressures #measures
In current
competiting
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
 world, more and more challenges are
infront
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in front
 of
pupil
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the pupil
. Not only educational, but familiar and commercial difficulties
also
. Behind these
situation
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situations
, there are
range
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a range
 of reasons and solutions. Both
,
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,
 causes and solutions are elucidated in upcoming text. The foremost reason for these
pressure
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pressures
 is
futuristic approach
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a futuristic approach
 of parents. They think that by getting
high score
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high scores
a high score
the high score
 in education span
,
Accept space
,
their child will be
get
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getting
honour
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an honour
 in society and clinch the best job in
industry
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the industry
, in
future
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the future
. As our guardian
said
express in words
told
 us that if you want a better life in upcoming years, you have to score good in your academic career else you will be
toiled
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toiling
 in your workplace. Another one is
burden
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a burden
, is given by school tutors to emphasize their results than the others.
Moreover
, interviews and other tests are conducted by job recruiters.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.
e
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E
 Mock tests, group interview and personal interview.That may impact on children and their parents, to impose strict environment in
study
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the study
a study
 may put more pressure on tender minds. To curb these dreadful situation, the best step
is required
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has required
is requiring
requires
 some changes
on
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to
 institutional result giving system. They should give priority on grade rather than score. So, It will altered parents mind vice a verse.
For example
, Gujarat government applied grade system in primary level despite of percentage in scorecard by doing these the
sucide
the act of killing yourself
suicide
 rate in children decreased almost
hafly
belonging to or derived from or associated with a divine power
holy
.
Secondly
, as industries required technical skill, they have to conduct task interviews.
Such
 as encounter their current problem by your technical abilities and secure your job not by only interview. Owing to
this
, other battles between
pedogogies
the principles and methods of instruction
pedagogies
pedagogues
 will be over.
Totally
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Totals
, In these steep
competiting
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
time
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times
, there are
anormous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
anomalous
anonymous
 reasons by which children facing
pressure but
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pressure, but
, by taking appropriate actions
,
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,
 those are
ancounter
come together
encountered
 easily.

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