It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to individual development and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions?

It is believed that education is one of the most important factors
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the individual development and prosperity of
societies
. From my point of view, I think that there are some ways
educations
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should follow to fulfil these functions.
To begin
with,
besides
general
studying
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programs, education should focus on enhancing
students
skills
.
Firstly
,
students
need to be equipped with comprehensive
skills
, including
problems-solving
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skills
, critical thinking
skills
, job-related
skills
and teamwork
skills
. At school, teachers should divide the class into
some
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teams which make
students
know how to work together effectively.
Additionally
, schools should invite some experts to teach
students
more life
skills
such
as how to survive in dangerous places, …
Furthermore
, each lesson should have theoretical and practical aspects. Nowadays,
students
only have to study some theoretical subjects.
Therefore
,
although
, they have good knowledge about the subject, they do not know how to apply it to their life.
To sum up
, if
students
have comprehensive
skills
and more practice, the development of
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societies
will be more stable.
Moreover
, schools need to teach
students
to have a social responsibility.
In particular
, schools should organize some
actual
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experienced excursions,
thus
,
students
can learn how to live in harmony with
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nature and improve their behaviour. What is more, teachers can make
students
aware of
difficult
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the difficult
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circumstance
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circumstances
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of some people in the world and
students
can know how to sympathize with other people.
As a result
, the
societies
will be more cultural and “greener”. In conclusion, education should enhance
students
skills
and make
students
have a social responsibility in order to develop individual and well-being
societies
.
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