most artists earn low salaries and therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that art education brings many benefits to the society while others believe that choosing arts as a major is lack of seriousness.I believe that

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the government

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should allocate funds for the arts sector because of the benefits it brings to the society.

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should pay equal attention to the art sector as it does to the other sectors from the examples of UK

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and Oxford university.

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began with, arts education have many social and academic benefits to students as it promotes self-direction learning and sharpens the creative problem-solving skills and critical thinking.

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provide a review about the history, traditions and culture of the nations.

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keep artists motivated to do their

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, the

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should give them enough salaries so the

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benefit from their

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everywhere else in the world because the citizens of the

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appreciate the artists for their services to their

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which in turn

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makes countries economy strong.

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, the suicide rate is the highest amongst the artists, which has increased at an alarming rate in the

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, the study published by the United Kingdom

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showed that, in the

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ten years the number of suicides committed by artists increased by seventy percent.

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the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

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should focus on the artists as they are

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the citizens of the state and should provide them with funds so that they

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can live a happy life. To sum up

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from the above arguments and examples, it is clear that

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goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

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should address the issues, the artists are facing in todays world as they are the valuable asserts of the

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and its because of the artist's

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, we have a better understanding of our culture, customs and tradition.If the

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addresses the above issues,

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believe that the popularity of arts can flourish in the near future.