Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, while flying makes
travel
to
faraway
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far away
destinations facile, some individuals claim that the usage of
airplanes
is likely to experience the diminution of demand in the upcoming days. In my view, there are some indications that
air
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the air travel industry
travel
industry has brought various benefits rather than its inconveniences.
However
, there are a number of reasons behind
this
point of view that will discuss in
this
essay. On the one hand, it is obvious flying shortens the
travel
time to the destination. Solely because a plane travels much faster than a car or train.
Besides
,
air
travel
allows passengers to relax more than driving,
hence
they don't have to be constant alertness to avoid an accident.
Furthermore
, reduction in
air
travel
leads to increasing the intensity of road terrific jams and road accidents.
For example
, according to annually traffic
police’s
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police
report after Nouruz holidays the high percent of road
accidents’
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accident
fatality happen for the purpose of having a faraway look regarding driving fatigue. As follows,
air
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
makes it possible that people can go anywhere easily and enjoy in-flight entertainments and services. Thereby reducing flights in the future, might effects on
tourism industry
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the tourism industry
in the world which could be worse drawback of
this
trend for
countries’ economy
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the countries’ economy
a countries’ economy
and international businesses.
On the other hand
, In the past several years
increased use
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the increased use
of fossil fuels has caused a serious threat to our environment.
Airplanes
use tones of fuels daily and release
large amount
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large amounts
a large amount
of carbon dioxide into
air which
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the air, which
the air which
has
negative impact
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a negative impact
on
planet
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the planet
.
In addition
,
this
dangerous gas has a huge portion in global warming.
as
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As
an illustration, beyond
number
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the number
of flights
travel
every day in all round the world that
give
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gives
rise to
air
pollution in terms of noise and emission of gases. Regard to
this
fact as
Accept comma addition
fact, as
some notable drawbacks, it is the positive aspect of
air
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
reduction. To conclude,
although
some believe flying is going to decrease one day, I think
air
traveling’s
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
travels
travel’s
travelling
profits are more than its detriment for people.
However
, it is better to use it considerably for the right purpose.
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