To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed.

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MODERN ERA, WE HAVE FORGOTTED THE IMPORTANT FEATURES OF

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, WHICH MAKE THEM MORE SPECIAL AND CHANCES TO WIN AN AWARD. IT IS SAID THAT, NOW, ANY KIND OF

ART

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BECOME FAMOUS WITHOUT EVEN IT HAS GOOD QUALITY. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW, THE NUMBER IS DECREASING FOR

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, WHICH SHOWS THE MAIN POINTS BECAUSE PEOPLE DO NOT NOTICE THEM, BUT BECOME POPULAR AND ACTUAL PAINTINGS ARE BECOMING UNTOUCHED.

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WITH, WE HAVE SEEN THAT, PEOPLE, NOWADAYS, DO NOT LOOK AT THE VITAL THINGS IN

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WORK DONE BY ARTISTS. TO BE CLEAR, THEY EVEN DO NOT KNOW WHAT MAKES A GOOD

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. THEY BUY IT BEACAUSE IT SEEM TO BE BEAUTIFUL OR FANCY. BUT, THE ACTUAL VALUES OF THEM ARE IGNORED.

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, SOME OF THE PAINTINGS SEND MESSAGES TO OUR NEW GENERATIONS ABOUT THE IMPROVEMENTS THAT THEY NEED TO DO FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. BUT, PEOPLE IGNORE THESE TYPE OF QUALITIES WHICH ARE VERY IMPORTANT AND FOR

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REASON ANY SCULPTURE BECOME PART OF MUSEUM.

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, SOME WORK OF ARTS BECOME UNPOPULAR BECAUSE THEY ARE BEING DONE BY POOR PEOPLE ASLO IF THEY ILLUSTRATES VERY GOOG QUALITIES LIKE PRIZEFUL COLOURS.

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MAKE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN PEOPLE BEFORE IT BE POPULAR. I HAVE SEEN THAT, CELEBRITIES WHO MAKE ANY

ART

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WHICH IS DULL AND LACK IN MAKING BEAUTIFUL BECOME VALUABLE IN

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WORLD AND BEING SELL FOR A HIGH RATE. SO, PEOPLE DO NOT LOOK AT THE QUALITIES IN

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THEY SEE IF IT IS DONE BY A FAMOUS PERSON OR NORMAL ONE. TO SUMMARIZE, I BELIVE THAT, QUALITIES ARE LESS SEEN IN ANY

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DUE TO SOME DIFFERENCES IN FAMOUS AND NORAML PEOPLE. THAT’S WHY, SOME VERY IMPORTANT PAINTING LOSS TO WIN AN AWARD AND SOME EVEN BECOME UNTOUCHED.

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Many people put their personal information online for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is positive or negative development?

Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries an increasing number of peope are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for goverments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. to what extent do you agree or disgree with this opinion?

Online shopping seems to be replacing the traditional method of buying. However some buyers are sceptical of this practice. Discuss both benefits and risks associated with online shopping.