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To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree?

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There are rules used as a basis to justify the worth of an artwork. In the past, many artists in history have been recognized for achieving these qualities; displaying exceptional masterpieces like Da Vinci, Picasso, Michaelangelo, and Van Gogh to name a few. But in recent times, there have been new forms of
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 and new artists have emerged shrouding the real pieces that were ought to be works-of-
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 which I greatly disagree. The rise of new artists and new forms of
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 does not mean the past
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 pieces are neglected. Since
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 generation consists of a new set of audience, the qualities sought in the past have changed. It all depends on the eye of these new judges that cause the new
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 form to be recognized along with the previous masterpieces. The notion of how new arts that are considered today as a masterpiece are seen by some as not suitable work-of-
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 is unacceptable.
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 is the modern era, the taste of people have changed. If these exact people lived in the past, the kind of
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 that artists present today will
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 be possibly recognized as a work-of-
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 in the past. So, it is wrong to say that
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 considered modern work-of-
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 is not a true masterpiece. In conclusion,
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, the past
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 pieces are not clouded by new artists’ pieces.
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, it is still remembered in
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 museums and exhibits as the greatest arts of all time, inspiring new artists to create their own style and dominate the
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 industry by showcasing bold artworks.

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