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Violence in media promotes violence in society. To what extend u agree.

#violence #media #society
In today's modern world, the number of people using media is rising
dramatically but
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dramatically, but
 only small of them are using online communication in the right way. People tend to act badly in
media
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the media
 and there is no doubt that
violence
 in the real life is affected by online activities.
This
 essay will explain
this
 idea
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in
 more detail.
First
,
violence
 in
media
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the media
 spreading
speedly
with rapid movements
speedily
 makes more people reach wrong information and imitate immediately. A clip or post is viewed by million people within a few minutes
by
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from
 the technology development.
This
 is why a post with the content of child abuse, domestic
violence
 or fighting can be spread widely and in the limelight. Take scandals of celebrities as
example
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an example
, they are those who
are often taken
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are often taking
often take
 photos by
papararies
 and
criticed
an essay or article that gives a critical evaluation (as of a book or play)
critique
 in social media even when they are out of shape or have
bankrupts
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bankrupted
. The fan prying into their life could impact them significantly.
Then
, releasing the films having
violence
 has
adverse influence
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an adverse influence
 in viewers. Many producers imply that criminal commitment or cybercrime should be
avoided but
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avoided, but
 generally they make people mimic. Many
violence
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violent
 actions in comic films or action movies in the real life are captured by youngsters. According to updated news, a large number of students after watching action movies having strong battles and magnifying content have conflict with classmates more frequently. In conclusion,
although
media
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the media
 is an efficient site to broaden our horizon, we should know how to prevent ourselves from
violence
 content as well as
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 controversial aspects.
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