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people have difference visions about shopping online some of them encourage and others says its disadvantage outweigh their advantage, what is your opinion?

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People divide into tow campuses about the shopping online' benefits. While people, proponents, Say that shopping online provides
a
Suggestion
an
 abundant option for consumers and save their time, opponents of
this
 idea claim that the online shopping increase marketing cheating. It seems to my thinking way that the commercial trade, alternative method, helps the buyer to compare between different brands and save their time and money.
Firstly
, people using the internet to shop have various options in
order
 to compare and get a best deal. If you go to specific mall, you will have limited options. Even though
this
 market is a large, it cannot provide for you
every thing
all things
everything
.
Moreover
, the price in market place logical will be higher than commercial sites, because
this
 traditional market place should buy for rent, electricity, water, parkings bills.
In contrast
, if you shopping online, you will find the bulk of of products with lower price, because the commercial trader just pays for an internet domain, price under 20 dollars per year.
Secondly
, it can be deniable that some shopping online inherent risk. The proponents say that if you were shopping online, no one would guarantee that you will get your
order
.
Additionally
, they say that maybe you got your
order
, but it maybe would come with different size and bad quality.
However
, it needlessly advice that people should shop from authentic commercial websites in
order
 to protect their self.
Second
 criticism says there a lot of cyber attacks trying stolen the consumers' information.
This
 flawed in commercial trade, but the consumers can avoid
this
 if he uses a credit card. In conclusion, I adamantly support people to shop online because they will can save their money and comparison different items in a few minutes.
Moreover
, there are some criticisms about their quality and privacy in online shopping, but these could avoidable. If people visit famous websites providing high security system, and using a prepaid band card
instead
 of a debate card.
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