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Some parents believe that cell phones are harmful to children, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#parents #cell #phones #children
Smartphones are
integral part
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an integral part
 of our
lives
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life
. Exposure of mobile phones is causing harm to children, as thought by some parents, whereas other disapprove
this
 thought. In my view, limited
use
 of smartphones can be educational for children;
however
, excessive
use
 of same can affect negatively. One of the common
issue
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issues
 is, mobile phones are affecting physical health of children. It is
common fact nowadays
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a common fact, nowadays
a common fact nowadays
 that children are addicted
to play
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to playing
 various
kind
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kinds
 of online games on cell phones and end up staring on mobile screens for hours together.
This
 affects their eyesight and causes neck and back strain.
As a result
, many of the kids, adapt bad posture from childhood itself and wear eyeglasses for
lifetime
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a lifetime
. Another crucial issue is that children who get
addictive
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addicted
 to excessive
use
 of mobile phones, spend a lot of their valuable time on mobile phones
instead
 of studying, which causes strain on their studies and lead to poor results. On the other side,
use
 of mobile phone has
also
number
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a number
 of educational benefits. Nowadays, there are many mobile applications, which can help children learn some of the difficult subjects
such
 as maths, science,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
 by using mobile phones.
For example
, applications
such
 as
vedantu
 has unlimited courses on various subjects, customized classes as per the age group and difficulty levels, it
also
 comes with one on one interactions with teachers whenever required.
Moreover
, children can access
this
 content anytime and from anywhere. In conclusion, even though mobile phones raise some concerns
on
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about
children
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children's
child
child's
 health, by limiting the time spent, it can be avoided and turned into educational time. Introducing children to useful applications and good content on smartphones, in my opinion, can help them succeed and learn enormously.
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