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NOWADAYS A LARGE AMOUNT OF ADVERTISING AIMED AT CHILDREN SHOULD BE BANNED BECAUSE OF THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

#amount #children #effects
Advertising is a part of marketing. Every company
use
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uses
 advertisements to promote their brands. There are few brands which specifically target children. They use different types marketing
stratgies
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
 to make their products closer to children. Some people argue that
this
 advertising
materials
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material
 causes some negative effects on kids. I agree
to
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with
 their statement. Today marketing is completely depends on advertising. It may be in digital form, audio or posters. Some of the brands which specifically target children, using inappropriate contents to gain the attention of the kids.
This
 may impact the children's behaviour and their interaction with others. There are a lot advertisements opened
debates
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debate
 on their negative effects on children.
For
example one
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example, one
 advertisement of a famous chocolate company is banned because of
it
it is
it's
 content. It claimed that by eating their chocolate they can gain good marks in school, which later raised an issue and banned by
government
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the government
. Children are
vlunerable
susceptible to attack
vulnerable
 to the negative things, they attract children very well. Kids can't judge them, they learn whatever they see. So, we should be careful
in
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with
 the content and medium what they are learning. Some advertisements
gives
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give
 a strong desire to use them, kids don't the know the consequences and the prices of those items, so they want them at any cost.
This
 type of behaviour brings problems to parents. These types of
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
 will be everywhere, like internet, television, posters etc... Examples are
adevertisments
 based on
superheros which
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superheroes, which
superheroes which
superhero which
 is the biggest thing in
market
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the market
. To conclude, as a responsible human we should make sure what we are
taeching
the profession of a teacher
teaching
 to our
next
 generations.
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