Today there are a lot of websites providing news on the internet. Some people believe that these websites will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Right to know information is a basic principal in the modern world and there are several ways of delivering news to the society. At present

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news on the internet. Some individuals opine that these news websites should completely take over the traditional newspaper and magazines.

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development will never be able to diminish the existence of newspaper and magazines. There are many reasons why news websites cannot replace newspapers.

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, paper based newspapers are very cheap and can be purchased off the shelf easily

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news on the internet requires expensive hardware

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as a laptop, computer or a smartphone.

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Furthermore newspapers

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one place to another. Another important fact is that not all people are computer literate and have access to the internet. As an example, a poor family affected by poverty cannot afford any technology. The only source they can obtain information is from the printed newspapers.

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, newspapers and magazines are straight forward and reader friendly. All the information and images are simply printed on a piece paper and avoids any type of complications to the reader.

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, unlike newspapers and magazines, computers and smart devices can cause eye disorders. For an example, researchers claim that the blue light projects from computer or smart phone displays will stress the eyes and cause poor visibility. In conclusion, some people may argue news website will be a substitute for traditional newspaper and

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accessibility: the quality of being easy to obtain or use.
Digitalization: the process of converting information into a digital format.
Subscription model: a business model where customers pay regularly to access a product or service.
Immediacy: the quality of bringing one into direct and instant involvement with something.
Eco-conscious: caring and concerned about the environment.
Credibility: the quality of being trusted and believed in.
Misleading information: information that gives the wrong idea or impression.
Tactile: related to the sense of touch.
Nostalgia: a sentimental longing for the past.
Screen glare: the bright and distracting reflection on a screen from a light source.

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Today there are a lot of websites providing news on the internet. Some people believe that these websites will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people says we should use free space in town and city for plantation a d some says that it should be used for construction. Do you agree or disagree?

In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, ther people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.