Nowadays longer distances are travelled by people to work and study on a daily basis . some consider it to be a negative development, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have various positions regarding whether spending a considerable amount of

time

for commuting between

home

to either working environment or educational atmosphere in a daily schedule is a

problematic

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problem

or rewarding issue. While moving between

home

to

work

or

study

place can be resulted in an amazing improvement, I generally believe that commuters would be facing a couple of difficulties. Some people are of the opinion that devoting the significant amount of

time

for commuting between two destinations for

work

or

study

purpose can instill a sense of dissatisfaction into commuters. Since they must be unmoved for a long period of

time

in

vehicles namely

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vehicles, namely

bus, train or individual cars, the principal major of energy

is consumed

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are consumed

in their daily schedule which can lead to decreasing of proficiency due to the diminishing of concentration in order to fatigue. If the competency of people were felt in their working or studying atmosphere, these fundamental changes would effect on the manifold aspects of either family life or vocational life. Take the staff’s salary can be

diminished which

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diminished, which

can result in financial difficulties; Their family can be witnessed numerous conflicts and ultimately can lead to ruined family due to not affording the essential requirements of family members. In my opinion, the adverse effects of being a long distance between working place and

home

can not

can not

cannot

be neglected. On the flip side, others purport that the

time

devoted for travelling between working or

home

atmosphere can be intended to marvellous achievements.

Firstly

,

although

people working or studying in a same environment sometimes are in a far place to one another,

this

tremendous

time

can be spent in constructive negotiations.

People

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A people

belonging to a similar gathering, as an example, can connect to each other

by

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with

modern applications

such

as

smartwatch

and their opinions can be shared throughout pictorial conversation.

Secondly

, people can broaden their horizon about various issues in

this

period of

time

by their electronic gadget.

For example

, training videos from reputable websites can be downloaded and watched by their cell phone. The commuting

time

,

thus

, can be assigned to enhancing the overall performance of commuters in the field of

work

or

study

. In conclusion, both of these perspectives are common through people

,

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,

however

, it seems to me that being a long distance from

work

or

study

to

home

can bring about exhaustion and discontentment with life.