Some people view teenage conflict with their parents is a necessary part of growing up. Whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

[Переслано от Abror 9 IELTS] Some people believe that conflicts or disagreements between teenagers and parents are, indeed, e

ssential part

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an essential part

of children's development.Others,

however

, think that

such

b

ehavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

should be discouraged. In my opinion, disagreements affect negatively to the children's mood, and, it should be prevented and avoided. On the one hand, there are positive sides of conflicting with parents for children's growing up period

;

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;

due to

this

, some teenagers want to leave and live individually. Obviously, there are not only merits of individual lifestyle, but

also

disadvantages. With fighting with parents in mind, some teens decide to leave from their own home and e

ven to abandon their

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even abandon their

f

amily.

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families

Certainly their outlook and experience is i

mroved,

made more desirable or valuable or profitable; especially made ready for use or marketing

improved

if they start to live without parents

.

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.

Nonetheless

, some of them break up the r

eleationship

a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)

relationship

relationships

with their parents because of battle, which is p

itiable situation

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a pitiable situation

the pitiable situation

nowadays.

On the other hand

, undoubtedly, parents' behaviour decides everything to the development of their children.

However

, conflicts which is a

ppeared

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appearing

between children and parents are, indeed, e

xtremly

to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect

extremely

popular among teenagers. Obviously, there are a number of issues influenced adversely to c

hildren

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children, such

such

as academical, social and

also

mental health problems, I think.

Moreover

, with conflicts in mind, parents just teach their children how to abuse verbally, I believe. Naturally, many of them discourage their children

instead

of motivate or urge to study, if they get a low mark in their education. In

such

cases, there exist useful as well as effective parenting companies, which one of them is I

PO

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an IPO

(

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nternational Parenting Organization). Undeniably, it r

eally help

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really helps

those who have hardship between children and parent by giving them some instructive information conducted by professional psychologists. To conclude,

although

there exist a few benefits of parenting conflicts, the demerits should not be avoided, I think. Obviously, teenagers experience another life and learn how to survive alone in some complicated conditions c

hoosen

one who is the object of choice; who is given preference

chosen

because of contradiction.

However

,

such

disagreements will lead to the academical and social issues, hard - solved problems these days, I believe.