People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problem? How to overcome it?

Dear sir or madam, I'
m
writing
this
letter to request you to change my start day in your
company
because of my previous commitment in
present working
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the present working company
company
. I received your offer letter today. I'
m
very happy after looking at it and excited to start working in your
company
, but there is an issue with the
preffered
more desirable than another
preferred
start date in the letter which is
next
Monday. I'
m
afraid that I can't make it because of previous commitments with my present
company
. I have been working with
this
company
from
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for
last three years
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the last three years
eleven months. I was signed with
this
company
for
four years contract
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a four year contract
four year contract
which is going to be
end
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the end
in
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of
next
month, so I'
m
requesting you to change the start date to
next
month. Please understand the situation and consider the request. I'
m
looking forward to hear back from you as soon as possible. Regards, Dheeraj.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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