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Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is undeniable that governments spend a large amount of
money
 on public celebrations.
Although
, some people think it useless to
use
 too much
money
 to create a
celebration
. From my point of view, I strongly agree with
this
 statement that
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
 should
use
this
 amount of
money
 on other useful things, described in the following paragraph.
Firstly
, is governments
use
 a lot of
money
 on the
celebration
that is
 only for entertaining the people and don't have any other benefits. While if the
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government's
 invest the
money
on
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in
 public service, it will be beneficial for everyone in the society.
However
, the
celebration
 is
also
important but
Accept comma addition
important, but
 the governments should
use
 less amount of
money
 on it. Though, there are many significant
issue
Suggestion
issues
 in the country
,
Accept space
,
but the public organization still concern on the
celebration
 more than
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 issue. There are many useful
thing
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things
 that lack in the country.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • allocate funds
  • cultural heritage
  • national pride
  • balanced approach
  • stimulate local economies
  • social cohesion
  • fostering social harmony
  • opportunity costs
  • address crucial issues
  • effective governance
  • public funds
  • overall societal benefit
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