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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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Many criminals
reoffend
money returned to a payer
refund
 after they have left prison and serve their
first
 punishment. The main reasons for
this
 issue are lack of rehabilitation, and a
difficulty
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difficult
 to apply for a job and the negative value of
society
 toward offenders. There are several solutions to implement and deal with
reoffenders
a person who transgresses moral or civil law
offenders
, which will be provided as below. One of the reasons why
reoffending
offending against or breaking a law or rule
offending
 is the lack of rehabilitation while they live in the prison. If they do not adjust their mindset and do not understand about the expected
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, it will lead to
reconviction
.
Moreover
, the difficulty in finding careers after being released is another factor. It has an effect since the amount of jobs is not enough for increasing the population.
Moreover
, some of
society
 still
do not provide
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does not provide
 a chance and have negative attitudes towards offenders.
As a result
, many of them are lacking income and will commit more crimes in the future. It might have been better if the mindset of the people in
society
 is open-minded for the
reoffenders
a person who transgresses moral or civil law
offenders
.
However
, it is still difficult for them due to the norms and values that re offenders will be stigmatised by Thai people.
Therefore
, the government should build the organization to provide
good
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better
 care and support for the rehabilitation. It could be a training department with useful skills while they stay in prison.
This
 will help them find an appropriate job in order to gain income, which gives them more choices. In order to reduce a number of
reoffenders
a person who transgresses moral or civil law
offenders
, the government should set up the department to follow up and monitor them closely for better living after the
first
 punishment.
However
, the strict law is most important to make people deeply aware of conviction and punishment and to decrease the number of crimes.
Finally
, an important way of dealing with criminals who
reoffend
money returned to a payer
refund
 is to give them an opportunity to live freely in
society
.

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