Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people
are believed
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believe
that having
news
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the news
,
such
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as in tv program or newspaper, in their life is have no different as a person who does not know.It is okay to not knowing the unimportant news, but what about the biggest news like the approaching of
tornado
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a tornado
nearby your area or Corona virus.In
this
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essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will argue why some people not seeing it crucial and some seeing it as
a
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an
essential one. Nowadays, even we can easily earn the news from around the world, but still, everyone
is not completely think
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is not completely thinking
has not completely thought
is not completely thought
they should know about it.It probably caused by they are not
see
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seeing
the benefits of having
know
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known
what is going on.Indeed, some news is having nothing to know,
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a kitten was rescued by
firefighter
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firefighters
a firefighter
this
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morning.So it is true that some news is nonsense.
Although
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there are some who don't interested, we still have the groups of people who do.No matter, they know it from TV or newspaper, or what topic is it.These people can know and prevent the bad thing, which might possibly happen.
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, while the citizen that have watched news know what to deal with Covid-19, the citizen who have not watched is in danger
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of
living the same lifestyle, no social distant.It is obvious that people who have know is having much more advantage than who have not. In conclusion, From the information, who have know and not have
know
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known
the news, with some example above have argued, It
have proved
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has proven
that the good side of knowing news
outweigh
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outweighs
the disadvantage.
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
strongly recommend everyone, children to elder, to spend some time
to watch
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watching
the news everyday as much as possible for your own benefits.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Informed
  • Current events
  • Public awareness
  • Local news
  • Global issues
  • Sensationalism
  • Misinformation
  • Bias
  • Community
  • Public safety
  • Health advisories
  • Market trends
  • Traffic updates
  • Weather forecasts
  • Educate
  • Raise awareness
  • Opinion formation
  • Decision making
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