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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However others believe that they can get news better through other media platforms. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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It is argued, that some people prefer other media platforms for getting news, than newspapers.
However
, in my opinion newspapers are more reliable, with more experience. On the one hand, our civilizations have been developing into an advanced and sophisticated form in recent decades.
As a result
 of that, the nature of informing people and spreading news
have been changed
Suggestion
has been changed
 specially thanks to widespread use of the
lnternet
.
Therefore
, due to the large volume and variety of data, you cannot tell which
source
 is
trustable
Manageable; tractable; hence, moderate; not violent
treatable
testable
, so,
this
 Leads to people’s reliance on more authentic newspapers that have
acountable
Suggestion
a countable
 background. But
this
 variety can
also
 lead to an advantage,
that is
number
Suggestion
a number
the number
 of choices.
For example
, you can read
comments
Suggestion
the comments
 of the USA’s president
on
Suggestion
of
 social media and you no longer need to receive news from a
third
 party
source
.
Thus
, it can decrease the chance of misinformation and misleading.
On the other hand
, newspapers have been our main
source
 of news throughout the history and have obtained experience and Prestige, so, they know that buy misinforming people they can damage their reputation or even worse harm the society.
Therefore
, their survival depends on complete, correct and neutral distribution of news. The fact that other media platforms or young and inexperienced,
puts
Suggestion
put
 them in
second
-tier
source
 of news. In conclusion, in my opinion newspapers because of their more experience, reliability and stability throughout these years, that led to their survival until now makes them better sources to get our news.

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