Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

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Parents can be the best teacher for every child coming on
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earth. I agree with
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statement as no learning institution can be compared with the parents as they are role models for their children since they open their eyes in
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world till they are fully grown up and matured. To start
with when
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with, when
the child is
born he
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born, he
sees his parents as his guide, mentor & teacher who will teach him how to speak, eat, drink, live, wear, interact etc. No one will be with him when he is crying for
anything it
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anything, it
will be the parents who will be with him for every problem and his / her every need. Even during his education days he will observe and learn that the
school
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school, although
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is the learning
institution but
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institution, but
the moral & ethical values learned from parents are far greater than any learning
center
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centre
and parents will be the one who wants the children to be the best in
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world and they want their children not to repeat the mistakes that they have done in their lives which any learning institution won’t care for as they can’t give individual attention to every student.
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, we see that generally the children who are
orphans
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orphaned
or could not get the attention from their parents don’t have that foundation of ethical, moral and social values as compared to the ones who have been trained by their parents despite all of them have gone to schools, colleges etc. The only difference between them is parents. If the parents are not well
educated they
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educated, they
could still prove to be good teachers for their
children but
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children, but
that will be of less fruitful from the highly educated parents as educated and learned parents will have more vision and more horizon as compared to the unlearned. I would like to conclude with the statement that parents can be a turning point for his child if he tries to teach every step of living
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life.

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