Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s opinions and ideas. Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

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Newspaper are an integral part of society.

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, peoples' lives are dynamically influenced by reading it.It is one of the most popular parts of the media, which is read by the majority of people. It can

also

change ideas and opinions of people in a drastic way. According to me, it is more positive

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than

negative situation, let's discuss both in the following essay. Reading the newspaper has a positive influence because of these reasons.To start with, people get to know about the political situation of the country.In order to identify the authenticity of the government, citizens can follow it. To explain in depth, it will give ideas to the voters to which political party, they can give their vote to.

Further

, citizens can

also

predict economic stability of the country by following

paper

media.

For example

, sometimes individuals can save money before investing during the starting period of recession by reading it in news articles. After positive impact let see one main negative impact on people who reads the newspaper. Many people blindly fellows

paper

media.

Additionally

, they sometimes even take wrong steps because it. News on deals are not always true. For an instance, to increase their sales,

paper

articles companies may modify the truth or sometimes even print false news.If reader are not careful and make some important decision of life, it can damage them financially as well.

For example

, a person invested its money in the fraud company by reading an advertisement in a

paper

medium. To conclude that, reading the newspaper has economic, social and political benefit,

however one

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should not just blindly influenced by reading it. Because, news are not always true.

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Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s opinions and ideas. Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

Fully explain your ideas

: In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages

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