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In these days and ages, since the Coronavirus epidemic is spreading all over the world, social distancing measures are being used to dealing with it. This solution would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.

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In these days and ages, since the Coronavirus epidemic is spreading all over the world, social distancing measures are being used to dealing with it.
This
 solution would create certain
benefits but
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benefits, but
 there will
also
 be some drawbacks. On the one hand, it is clear that social distancing would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it would prevent the spread of the disease.
In particular
, the goal of social distancing is to reduce the contact between infected people and uninfected people in order to minimize the transmission, infection and eventually death. Another benefit is that it would help protect the environment. Because people have to stay at home and do not go outside, there are not any transportation.
This
 will make the environment fresher and greener.
On the other hand
, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise.
First
 and foremost, social distancing cripple the economy. Specifically, the restaurants, companies and many stores have to be closed down because of the influence of the disease, which would make the economy undeveloped.
Secondly
, the unemployment rate is increasing rapidly.
This
 means that residents do not have enough money to live through the disease so that the poverty would be
arise
Suggestion
a rise
. In conclusion, social distancing has both advantages and disadvantages

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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