Today, food travels thousands of miles from the farm to the consumer. why is this? Is it positive or negative trend?

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last few decades

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the last few decades

technology

has

definately

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

shrunk the world. Owing to these, not only people, but

also

food, tradition, innovations,

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

are available ubiquitously as

similarly

native land

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the native land

native lands

Eating

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Earthing

materials,

also

influenced by these advent. The reasons behind these universal availability of staples and the merits-demerits are discussed

further

. Availability of all cuisines

universally have

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universally has

many logics and the foremost one is packing industry development. Due to its

upgradation

, the packed food can stored as intact for one year or more than.

For example

, foods are packed in container by using nitrogen gas

technology

can preserve food for a longer time as well as contamination free for a year.

Moreover

, using frozen

technology

, all raw materials and vegetables, fruits

etc

are frozen by it and sent it to customers. To exemplify, frozen beans, tomatoes, and mangoes grow in India during limited period of season, which are frozen and exported to the USA, Canada and many other countries. Each coin has two sides

similarly

packaging of edible items by using

technology

has both. In case of benefits, people able taste their favourite cuisine in anywhere. To illustrate, Indian people can enjoy

indian

a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived

Indian

dishes in USA and

chinese

a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China

Chinese

dishes

also

serve in India.

However

, the demerit is

original taste

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the original taste

hamper, because of

frozing

the withdrawal of heat to change something from a liquid to a solid

freezing

and

nitrozen

a common nonmetallic element that is normally a colorless odorless tasteless inert diatomic gas; constitutes 78 percent of the atmosphere by volume; a constituent of all living tissues

nitrogen

treatment. In

easy word

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easy words

an easy word

, genetic alteration might be happened by applying chemicals on vegetables and its taste could be altered. All in all, packaging industries make eatable items more feasible and available to their lovers, but there are some merits and demerits

also

, which are not

eschewable

for developers.

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"Prevention is better than cure" Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that children who commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that hosting an international sport event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.