Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

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oday many

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Today, many

children get a lot of stress from academic, social and commercial effects. In our c

hallanging

requiring full use of your abilities or resources

challenging

world, many possible solutions must be evaluated. In

this

essay, I will explore some of the causes of these problems, as well as proffer reasonable resolutions f

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to

this

issue

. Regarding to the causes of

this

issue

, there are blatant and obvious causes. One p

otent

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potential

cause of academic pressure to the young people is the s

hortege

the property of being an amount by which something is less than expected or required

shortage

shorter

of the profession for the graduate students.

For instance

, there i

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are

no many jobs a

vailabe

obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service

available

for information technology graduate students in my country. Coming to the effect of social

issue

, many children within p

oor familiy

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the poor family

poor family

get a lot of p

sycological

mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature

psychological

hurt from their neighbours. To i

llusterate,

clarify by giving an example of

illustrate

I know one of my f

riend

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friends

who has a child, but he could not afford to get for him whatever he w

ant.

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wants

He said to me that his boy is e

xtreamly

to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect

extremely

hurt in p

sycological context.

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a psychological context

psychological context

sociological context

In addition

, many boys could not get high salary due to their ineffective marketing strategy.

As a result

, they might get fired from their work. Turning to the viable solutions to these

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issues

there are many approached. For academic

i

ssue,

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issues

the most effective one is to get a high quality e

ducations

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education

from a h

igh

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highly

ranked university. T

he young

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Younger

The younger

children, who get his education from H

arverd

American philanthropist who left his library and half his estate to the Massachusetts college that now bears his name (1607-1638)

Harvard

university as an example will have a better job in his country or abroad. For the social

issue

, I think the most effective and approved resolution for the children is to get involved and communicate with their c

osins

the child of your aunt or uncle

cousins

and friends. To i

llusterate

clarify by giving an example of

illustrate

more, the boys who are s

ocial

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socially

a

vtive

tending to become more severe or wider in scope

active

will overcome the effect of social issues.

Lastly

about the solution of marketing or commercial i

sssue,

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the boys who have an excellent background in marketing will get promoted and will continue in his job, Take my friend Ahmed as an example. He is a manager of his company, but he had finished many courses for marketing before he got that position. In conclusion, I think that the issues that face the children these days are more d

engerous,

involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm

dangerous

dangers

and we have many r

esbonsibilites

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibilities

to h

ep

the activity of contributing to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose

help

them go through them. In the near future, I hope the government as well as the parents will take many effective steps to h

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handle

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uch as these issues.

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issues such as these

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