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Nowadays, museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourist instead of locals. Why is this happening? What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more?

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In the modern times, cultural and heritage sites are being visited
of
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by
 foreigners than local people.
This
 is due to more exposure of local citizens on museum and historical sites that made them uninterested. The writer
also
 believes that lesser price or no entrance fee at all can encourage locals to look back their
history
. Currently, it is noticeable that most citizens of a country are rare visitors of the cultural sites, while more foreign nationals are frequent visitors as they find it interesting. Locals who
has been
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have been
 too familiar
to
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with
 their
heritage
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heritage, history
history
 are not interested to know more about it.
For example
, primary schools
are usually conducting
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usually conduct
field trip
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field trips
a field trip
 for students to help them familiarize with their own country. But, as the time goes by, they had so much of their culture and prefer to learn and experience something new. Nowadays, cultural and historical sites are visited by majority of different nationalities than the citizens of a country, but
this
 can be changed by providing discounted rates to locals in general. By doing so,
instead
 of going somewhere new
this
 could attract and remind them of their
history
.
For instance
, the Sagrada Familia Cathedral in Spain gave
50% discount
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a 50 % discount
 to local citizens.
This
has improved
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history has improved
history
 knowledge and increased visits from their own people. In conclusion, most foreigners now have been the museum and historical
site
an instance of visual perception
sight
-goers,
instead
 of local people, because they find it uninteresting,
however there
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however, there
 are still ways to persuade them to appreciate and revisit their own culture.
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