The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The line graph indicates alterations in the quantity and variety of junk food ingested by Australian youth that occurred during a

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period. It is interesting to mention that the aggregate of

pizza

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and

hamburgers

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were

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improved,

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the utilization of chips and fish experienced a plunge over the period. But they are all finished at

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equal level. As the pie chart shows, the most trendy meal among adolescents

were

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fish and chips.

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to another it was eaten 5 times more in 1975th. After witnessing a fall, a gradual went up is clearly seen.

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, it

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dramatically dropped after a slight growth, which is mentioned in 1985. In considerable contrast to

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, teens ate

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and

hamburgers

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at higher levels.

Pizza

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consumption has risen insensibly since 1975 and remain constant since 1995th. Speaking of the expenditure

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hamburgers

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,

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by contrast

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to

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it saw a sharp improvement at the beginning.

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,

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stabilized from

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the 1990’s

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1990’s

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to 2000 after a substantial upward trend, the same as

pizza

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.