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Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning.

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People have different views on how to achieve success. Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. From my experience and observation, I believe that success results from careful planning.
First
, I believe that careful planning helps a
person
 to analyse his goal more deeply and make realistic goals.He knows exactly what he
want
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wants
. Take
chance
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chances
, from the other hand, doesn’t give the opportunity to clearly
undertand
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
 a goal. A
person
just want
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just wants
 to do
sth
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Sth
 to move forward and he takes risks when there is no need of it. A fixed plan helps a
person
 to achieve it and make a
person
 more determined and object oriented than those who don’t have a fixed aim.
Second
, careful planning teaches people to arrange their time more carefully in order to reach their goals. They become more patient and calm. They plan every step.
This
 allows people to find an easier way to reach their goals and move forward faster. From the other hand, people who prefer to take risks without planning may spend more time without any improvements waiting for a chance to take. Take
sportmens
someone who engages in sports
sportsmen
for example
, they exercise a lot before their performance
,
Accept space
,
 do all their best and improve their
perious
fraught with danger
perilous
porous
 results.
Finally
, careful planning teaches them not to give up, try to find other ways to reach their goals in the case of failure.To sum up, personally, I think that all people who succeeded in life would agree that their
succees
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
successes
sources
 come with their hard work and careful planning.
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