People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion

The prevalence of environmental issues has been a growing concern in the past few years. Many people believe that the cost of fuel for vehicles should be increased to tackle

this

problem.

While

I consider that

this

might be an alternative solution, I would argue that there are still some measures

should

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be contributed

greater

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impact. If the national authorities raise the taxes on petrol,

this

will address two environmental issues.

Firstly

, in terms of

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private cars and vehicles,

this

policy reduces the limitation of the number

cars

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of cars

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in

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on

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the roads by motorists.

This

leads to the decline of gas emissions into the atmosphere.

Secondly

, from the perspective of the government,

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providing

this

policy creates an increase in the number of people that use public

transportations

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transportation

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.

This

leads to the government

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forced to upgrade and expand the infrastructure

transportations

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transportation

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which

use

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uses

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the

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friendly petrol for the environment.

On the other hand

,

while

this

rise in fuel prices might be a useful stopgap measure, authorities could adopt other policies which would be more effective in the long term. From the perspective of the industrial field, state authorities could promote incentive taxes to the companies which use green power in their productions.

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the incentive, strategy contributes

more

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to more

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firms changing their visions on green-house

effect

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effects

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into

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the environment. Another policy would be to introduce free bus and train passes

help

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in the effort to combat global warming. In conclusion, even though the increasing price

on

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of

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fuel for vehicles can contribute to reducing the environmental problems, I would argue that more measures have been mentioned above which can be more effective to tackle

this

issue.