Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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With the recent dramatic development of technology,

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lovers can enjoy watching films on their mobile devices

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of going to the cinema whereas some people are against

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idea. Both sides have their merits and On the one hand, cell phones and other smart devices indeed provide people with a wealth of movies of options in their pockets anytime, while cinemas often only distribute a film in two weeks. As my example, I have been in Canada for two years. During the time, I have been missing dozens of movies which were exclusively shown

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the Vietnamese market.

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, I can enjoy them on my

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when they are uploaded online. I can

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pause the progress and

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continue watching a

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without missing any exciting parts. Another advantage of seeing films on mobile devices is that they cost equivalent a meal for a whole year. Family members can share one premium account on Netflix or Amazon and

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they can bring the whole cinema home.

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, being one of the people to sit in the cinema room to enjoy a brand-new

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is exciting, which gives consumers a sense of pride, especially if the

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is on its premiere and tickets are all sold months prior.

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, it is undeniable that the quality of sound and images and the atmosphere produce a tremendous effect on all customers’ senses.

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, they can have a sense of contentment by being at the scene.

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, on the release days, customers can buy souvenirs

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as figures, stickers, or badges of the movies to their collections.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

270 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Convenience
Mobile Viewing
Cost-efficient
Time-efficient
Personalized experience
Immersive
Cinematic experience
Surround sound
Collective experience
Technical superiority
Sensory experience
Social hubs
Cultural events
Distractions
Preservation
Filmmaking art
Cinematographic nuances

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Include an introduction and conclusion

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