The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart demonstrates the usage of various types of commuting to and from work in a European city in three different years: 1960, 1980 and 2000. At the first
glance
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it can be seen that only car transportation gradually increased throughout the period,
while
others witnessed only
reduction
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. In 1960, 20% of citizens used buses as a
mean
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of transportation to
the
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work, but
this
number grew up to nearly 28% and
then
declined to 18
percent
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.
In contrast
, the number of private car users was the lowest in 1960, exactly 7-8%,
however
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this
percentage rocketed to 25
percent
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after two decades and
then
again it sharply soared to its peak at 38% in 2000. Meanwhile, almost 28%
people
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used bikes in 1960 and in 1980 the number decreased by 5% but in 2000 it dramatically fell to approximately 7%.
Finally
, in 1960 the most popular mode of transport used to travel to work and back was just walking, at 35%.
Nevertheless
,
this
percentage experienced a great slump and it collapsed by 17% to 18%.
This
tendency continued, and it almost halved to 10
percent
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per cent
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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