The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart demonstrates the usage of various types of commuting to and from work in a European city in three different years: 1960, 1980 and 2000.
At the first
glance
it can be seen that only car transportation gradually increased throughout the period, Add a comma
,glance
while
others witnessed only reduction
.
In 1960, 20% of citizens used buses as a Correct article usage
a reduction
mean
of transportation to Fix the agreement mistake
means
the
work, but Correct article usage
apply
this
number grew up to nearly 28% and then
declined to 18 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, the number of private car users was the lowest in 1960, exactly 7-8%, however
Add a comma
,however
this
percentage rocketed to 25 percent
after two decades and Change the spelling
per cent
then
again it sharply soared to its peak at 38% in 2000.
Meanwhile, almost 28% people
used bikes in 1960 and in 1980 the number decreased by 5% but in 2000 it dramatically fell to approximately 7%. Change preposition
of people
Finally
, in 1960 the most popular mode of transport used to travel to work and back was just walking, at 35%. Nevertheless
, this
percentage experienced a great slump and it collapsed by 17% to 18%. This
tendency continued, and it almost halved to 10 percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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