Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A certain portion of
population
Suggestion
the population
believe
that secondary school students should be taught in their Suggestion
believes
education
whilst others disagree that and think it will lead to waste student's
Suggestion
the student's time
time
which is considerable. I think education
schedule has enough time
for benefit activity.
To begin
with, some authorities think that studying real news about all around the world
necessary for students because if education offer
to students Suggestion
education offers
an education offer
this
lesson, students will be more awareness
about Suggestion
more aware
world
and Suggestion
the world
learn follow news
. Suggestion
learn to follow the news
learn follow the news
Moreover
, children are grew
being no idea about worlds issues and events by these Suggestion
are grown
education
program
. In Suggestion
programs
recent survey
in Sweden show that Suggestion
a recent survey
contemporary
Suggestion
the contemporary education system
education
system make children to isolation
individual about Suggestion
isolate
isolated
real
Suggestion
the real world
world
. This
is why, governments should alter in their education
systems.
On the other hand
, those who opposed to this
say that students could not get lessons such
as maths and science because of lack of time
. If new modules add to program
, already jammed program
will be more jammed. Actually no
evidence to support Accept comma addition
Actually, no
this
view. However
, experts usually say that It is clear that education
program
include many mistakes and science lessons' problems are not relevant with lack of time
, there is a mistake in another statements
.
In conclusion, the fact that students do not know our Suggestion
state
statement
world
and there is not logical solution
without adding Suggestion
a logical solution
new activity
to existing school Suggestion
new activities
a new activity
program
. There is some doubt that it will causes
serious Suggestion
will cause
time
problems but
experts and most research show that it will not affect other lessons.Accept comma addition
problems, but
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!