Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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busy world. Every day the news of hazard can be seen is social media. While some people believe that government should abide strict rules for the drivers who break the rules, but other people opine that there are still other ways to minimize

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with, it is inarguable that people are less responsible in recent days. If they have to go to work they never estimate the more time to travel, they just wake up late and drive in rush to reach work by time.

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, some driver is so cruel that if someone get slight tough from their truck, they murder the victim by moving their vehicles back to lead them die. If government abide some rules like a death sentence to those drivers who intend to kill. So there will be less chances of those

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generation. So, it must be strictly bounded.

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problematic because there are a number of people who are driving their vehicles illegally

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investigation should be done to find out the people who are driving unethically. To sum up, punishment like death sentence is necessary for those drivers who are Curel but proper investigation should be done before stamping someone guilty.

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Topic Vocabulary:

deterrent
repeat offenses
infrastructure improvements
public awareness campaigns
reckless driving
traffic management technologies
intelligent traffic lights
speed cameras
public transportation
minimize
enhance safety
allocate funds
road signs
road safety

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