 You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter your friend. In your letter:  Say where you are going  Describe your house  Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house • You should write at least 150 words. • You do NOT need to write your own address.

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In the
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period, the US, UK, and other European countries generally had
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reduction in
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was helped by periods of full-time employment, rising real wages,
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trend was perpetually in reverse causing
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‘’the rich get richer and poor get poorer’’. In
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we will review the cause and solution to
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global issue. The fundamental cause of
income
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and
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system
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growth of
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benefit
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system
in the countries like UK and
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affects the real wages of
people
. Those
people
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on the
benefit
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system
have become worse off. Other factors include
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in
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in indirect taxes has
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the gap between rich and poor to a greater extent. Arguably globalization and economic development
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on
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labor
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of a country. Nowadays, there
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less work for unskilled
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;
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been moved to
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.
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leads to unemployment causing
people
to opt for low paying jobs, temporary jobs which offers little protection. The rich can
benefit
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and the asset value increases as the years go by, widening the gap between rich and poor. In order to reduce the
income
inequality
, the government have to
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level of each individual, build assets for working families who
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on
benefit
systems, redistribute the welfare
system
for the
people
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income
. The government should aid private sector industries by providing benefits in their taxation to avoid relocating which in turn helps to employ unskilled
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. After discussing the pertinent problems associated with increasing disparity, I felt that the only way to solve them is through joint efforts from the government, individuals, and private companies.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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