Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

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In many nations uneducated is acute issue

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which numbers are increasing

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There seem to be two main causes, and a number of effects, which we will discuss here. Perhaps,

this

issue is caused by low qualified teachers. These days more and more teachers are losing their motivation and becoming passive on students' education due to a heavy workload. Over the

last

decade

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there has been a prolific increase in requirement for teachers

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meanwhile salary and social security stay constant. The

second

key cause is families financial background. Numerous families are destitute to let their children pursue higher proper education. As

such

young people have to start working to support their families financially as soon as they can. For an illustrative example, children in China or India have been sent different kind of factories, which triggered to work in supporting their families. Regarding the effects

this

problem may bring about financial hardships to the economies of many countries and

this

change citizens income.

For instance

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when

younger generation

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the younger generation

replaces elder one

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the effects of

luck

the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable

lack

of knowledge might lead to the crisis.

In addition

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more educated politicians and businessmen from other countries can rule these

countrie

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

counties

country

. Another

enourmous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

enormous

influence would be increasing rate of unemployment

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so many young people have no education and few employment opportunities. In fact,

this

can lead to the temptation of

such

young people to engage in petty crimes,

such

as shoplifting or vandalism, which will make crime rates dangerously high. To sum up, Illiteracy, it is mainly caused by slow economic growth, which directly affects the family income status in the modern world.

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Literacy
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Discrimination
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Cultural norms
Technological advances
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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

some people say that school should reward students who show the best academic results, while other believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that the current system of both teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

Some people believe that it is good for a country’s culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?