Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #companies #industries #move #areas #centers

Although

people thought that it is

advantagesous

giving an advantage

advantageous

advantages

for big companies and industries to shift to local areas outside the urban areas.In my opinion

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I think that moving

insdustries

the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise

industries

to regional areas bring more benefits compared to any disadvantages it might bring. Despite the drawbacks below

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I believe that companies and industries gain more benefits by shifting to regional areas.

Firstly

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the cost workers in local areas are low.

This

helps companies to earn more profit than

other

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the other

Secondly

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regional area have

lot

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lots

of water facilities and

also

space to throw waste.As

result

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a result

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companies and industries no need to worry about the resources and makes their work faster and

smoother

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smoothly

without any problems.In a recent survey conducted by the popular private organization about the industries and companies

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some encouraging facts have been discovered.It is found that industries and companies located in regional areas gained more profits and reputation compare to others.

Therefore

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it is imperative that to keep more companies in

regional area

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regional areas

the regional area

to earn more benefits

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Admittedlly

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Admittedly

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there are some issues involved keeping companies and industries in regional

ares

a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)

areas

.One problem is that companies have

lot problems

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a lot problems

with

transportion

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

transporting

facilities which takes

lot

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a lot

of time to shift products to cities and

also

cost little money.Another negative aspect is

lack

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the lack

a lack

of electricity and

this

effects

the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion

affects

companies

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company's

companies'

production because most of industries depend on it.

For instance

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if industries and companies have poor

electricity it

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electricity, it

brings less problems to the companies. In conclusion

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companies and industries in regional areas earn more money and reputation and it clearly any disadvantages it might bring.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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4 paragraphs

245 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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