What do you think about covid -19 has important effects on our lives.

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Nowadays ,peop
le
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all over the world are fighting a big problem which is called Cobid-19(coron
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virus ).
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virus continues to affect our lives significantly for a few reasons. Which are
isolation
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and otheri
ng.
something offered (as a proposal or bid)
offering
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effect of
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The first effect
First effects
Covid-19
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is
isolation
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. Corona virus spread very quickly because of that all crowded places are closed by governments
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as shopping malls , caf
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, textile stores, schools and most of work office. Due to fact that people must stay at home to protect their lives. All of experts warn people not to leave home. If people ignore
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notice ,it b
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omes harder to deal with the virus like in Italy. To illustrate,Italy
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is a country that has the most dead people owing to Corona virus in the world. Their public do not
comply with
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does not comply
the warning.
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, the virus affected so many people in Italy.
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,
isolation
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impres
s human
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impresses
psychology badly. People of my country tend to hug, and family visits so that they feel depressed through
Covid-19
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and
also
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all people concern about their future lives. Despite the
isolation
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of people from the social environment, the number of patients are in
creasing.
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is increasing
Another effect of
Covid-19
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is otheri
ng. Some
logical or comprehensible arrangement of separate elements
ordering
offering
altering
people blame China for the emergence of
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virus since they eat all kinds of animal
s meat,
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animal
animal's
but some of them are blame
Europ
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blaming
blamed
ean countries as they do not pay attention to personal cleanliness and scientists think that Corona virus spread cuz al
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for the reason that; on account of
because
eople have a share in the disruption of nature. I agree with their opinion. Thanks to these ideas
people start
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ideas, people
ed to harm social integrity by discrimination.
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, the virus mostly affects patients aged 65 and over, people enter to put pressure on these age groups.
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pressure started to hurt people and social structure begun to be a damaged.
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, a boy who record a video that includes a olde
r
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an
person
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,
this
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person
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was offended by the boy as he was out. After the video expend over the internet. People split into two ideas. Some people think that the boy is right because the ol
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the older
person
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did not comply with warnin
g. The
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a warning
the warning
view I agree with is
that is
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should be said taht i
t is
pointing out something
that
a bad idea to go out in gentle language that the
person
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may not know about warnings. In conclusion,,
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,
-19 is eff
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has affected
is affects
is affecting
affecting
ives in many ways. I mentioned that some of them which are moving away from social areas and discrimination. I suggest that governments should support people who are psychologically in need and governments should find a way to adequately inform all people.

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