The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrests.
The supplied pie chart illustrates the number of people arrested
in
1989 until 1994 and the given bar chart gives information about the most common causes Change preposition
from
for
arrest.
Generally, females were less involved in crime than males and the most significant reason for Change preposition
of
arresting
was public drinking.
Replace the word
arrest
To begin
, during the period of five years
women were arrested approximately one in ten Add a comma
,years
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
men were more than a third
. Obviously, for males around two thirds
, Add a hyphen
two-thirds
on the contrary
majority of ladies were not arrested so often.
Turning to the bar chart, females were mostly involved in public drinking and assault arrests b around 6 percent
more than males. Change the spelling
per cent
Moreover
, women figures about the breach of order and theft were almost equal, likewise
, men were caught for theft and assault with the
difference of exactly a Correct article usage
a
percent
. During the research people arrested for unknown reasons were approximately Change the spelling
per cent
in
a small fraction.Change preposition
apply
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