The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrests.

The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrests.
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The supplied pie chart illustrates the number of people arrested
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1989 until 1994 and the given bar chart gives information about the most common causes
for
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arrest. Generally, females were less involved in crime than males and the most significant reason for
arresting
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was public drinking.
To begin
, during the period of five
years
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women were arrested approximately one in ten
percent
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,
while
men were more than a
third
. Obviously, for males around
two thirds
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,
on the contrary
majority of ladies were not arrested so often. Turning to the bar chart, females were mostly involved in public drinking and assault arrests b around 6
percent
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more than males.
Moreover
, women figures about the breach of order and theft were almost equal,
likewise
, men were caught for theft and assault with
the
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difference of exactly a
percent
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. During the research people arrested for unknown reasons were approximately
in
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a small fraction.

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