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You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home You want to give your opinion about this Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper In your letter Explain how you learnt about these plans Say what you think of the park, give your opinions on the plans

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to complain about the company which is going to build new blocks of flats shortly future. It is going to be located near my house, in the place where is now the local park is. About
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 information, I had read in the public group of our district on the social net where was a huge discussion against these plans.
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 with, our city is fully occupied with buildings and
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 one of the places where we have a rest zone and, of course, it is the place for walking with children where they can entertain themselves and parents wouldn't pay attention to their safety, because there is a well-educated staff here.
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, I believe that building new houses wouldn't
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 our amazing and picturesque nature, it would destroy it: many animals in the park would be without homes and they would die.
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 citizens kindly ask you to check the company's ability to build their objects here. Because they would like to fight for the beautiful park in our area. Yours faithfully, Maria Ivanova
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