Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people health,more and more people eating it.why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

These days, a huge amount of medical staff urges people not to consume junk food, but
although
doctors' speech is here, there are lots of fans of
such
products. In
this
essay I am going to try to understand and what is moving people on
such
actions and what can help them to stop killing their bodies.
First
of all, there are many reasons why people are starting to eat fast food stuff. The main cause is because it is convenient to go to a bistro cafe in a walking distance of their work or home and have a quick snack, so afterwards they save their time was is important in big cities nowadays,
instead
of having dined in and eat home-cooked meal.
Besides
, there is a huge amount of fans because it is tasty products which adore even different ingredients which include sugar and so there is resentment of taste qualities. Under these circumstances, we have many diseases
such
as diabetes, obesity. There should be government's programmes about how to stop
such
bad habit among the citizens. The main, what they can do, is to follow on the experience of different countries,
for example
, in Greece, where they don't have
such
brand as McDonald's at all, so, for
this
reason, they open more space for Greek cuisine business, for the meal which is healthier and tasty too.
Also as
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Also, as
lots of people are on the Internet stars can show on their example how to have a healthy life through different training sessions and videos with a healthy meal which is full of nutritional products. In conclusion, there must be social programmes which will explain to people why it isn't appropriate to consume
such
cuisine. I strongly believe
that is
only governments could help to get the result here.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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