Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

In the era of globalization, it is easy nowadays to import and export the goods from different countries, same applies to the foods and products shipped across the world to satisfy the demand and supply of other nations.
it
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It
has both advantages and disadvantages associated with
this
.
To begin
with, the local grown
food
is beneficial for both people and the economy of that nation. If people start eating their native grown
food
, it will help the local farmers with the money and encourage them to grow more
food
in their lands.
Moreover
, the impact, shipping of
foods
benefit
goods
across
country
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the country
creates, will be low.
The low
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Lower
carbon emissions will help
reducing
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reduce
green house effect
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the greenhouse effect
greenhouse effect
as the
food
travel through the planes or ships and it
emit
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emits
the pollutants that are harmful for
ozone layer
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the ozone layer
. By using local
food
, we can reduce the footprint and have
more healthy environment
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a more healthy environment
. On the other side, by importing and exporting the
foods
benefit
goods
from other places, one can enjoy and taste their loved
food
any time
,
Accept space
,
any season of the year and can
also
explore new foods that are not available in their local shops. It
also create
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also creates
has also created
opportunities for jobs for people as there will be so many people involved
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a unit of length equal to one twelfth of a foot
in
the process of the shipping and receiving.
This
could be disadvantage of
this
system that it may
low
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lower
the morale of the local suppliers and they may stop working as they
can not
can not
cannot
handle the pressure of the demand and
can not
can not
cannot
keep up their prices with the global rates In my opinion, both facts
has
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have
their own benefits and
limitations but
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limitations, but
the benefits are way more ahead than of the limitations.

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