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Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nations,others ,however think that tv and internet is the best way to learn.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #travel #nations #tv #internet
It is often argued by some people t
hat visiting a
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that people visiting
country
 is the best
option
 to learn about a nation, while others believe that
knowledge
 attained through television and internet is sufficient enough.
This
 essay will discuss both sides and will provide an opinion at the conclusion. On one hand, Modern enhancements in technology has made
public
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have made
knowledgeable about different countries.
In other words
, browsing information on internet
or watc
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the internet
hing Television has provided public w
ith an
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the public
 easy way to gather information about a specific
country
.
Additionally
, the
knowledge
 can be attained in a cost effective way using these options.
For instance
, if a person wants to learn about life style of Canadian public
then
 there is an
option
 to search internet
using W
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the internet
ikipedia or Youtube
.The pu
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YouTube
bl
Accept space
.
ic can
also
 follow travel related channels like Travel world to attain the much needed
knowledge
.
On the other hand
, travelling to
country
to lear
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a country
the country
n about the place provides live
experience
 to travellers.Travel provides opportunity to learn variety
of cult
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a variety
the variety
ures prevailing in the
country
 and
also
 an
option
 to interact with different type of people living in the
country
.
For example
, a person visiting Niagara falls will get a life tim
e
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
experience
 and feel of the falls.The
knowledge
 and
experience
 gained out of it can be cherished for many years. To conclude, even though , trav
el
Accept space
,
provides a life tim
e
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
experience
 and
knowledge
 about a
country
,
however
, considering the affordability of each individual, I strongly believe learning about a
country
 through Tv and Internet is the most viable
option
.
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