Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Crime is unquestionably one of the most prevailing and worrying aspects in any society, and its prevention should be taken seriously. Crime prevention can be executed in various ways,

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through a

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presence in the community and

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through international

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. A local presence

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incorruptible law enforcement authorities may be costly,

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, the long-term investment would pay dividends in the future. A safer region would encourage trade, investment and set an invaluable example for younger generations.

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, crime has dramatically been reduced in the Favelas around Rio de Janiero in Brazil.

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was achieved largely through the government committing large funds of money to stationing police headquarters in and around the slums. These financial expenditures greatly benefited the community.

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, due to the large-scale severity and the global impact that crime has in some areas of the world, global

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is critical. Operating in a different way would incur significant financial losses and render any expenditure futile.

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, Somalian pirates in Africa have reigned terror amongst many ocean transport companies in the area. Only through large-scale international

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was policing the area possible.

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, crime reduction can be attributed to a joint effort between countries. To conclude, illegal activities are a costly and dangerous

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the present global economy;

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, through large-scale government investment prevention is an attainable goal.

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, spreading the expense through international

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the resources invested can be significantly more effective in reducing criminals’ effectiveness abroad.