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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes .Do you agree or disagree.

#people #person #culture #character #choice #clothes
Here I would like to say about the person skill and cast
from
Suggestion
about
 the choice of clothes, regarding
this
 some would agree and others will disagree. So I will say about my personal opinion, in some part of the world on the early ages, the people struggle to live like they doesn't have enough money, land and food to eat. In those days people had no choices of wearing good clothes or their experience won't say about the characters. After a long struggle from the early days
,
Accept space
,
now people life has improved a lot, the technologies are growing day to day. New inventions are made every day.
Also
, we should take one thing into consideration is the climate. Due to
this
 rapid technology development, there is a global crisis in the climate change. In the modern world the style plays a vital role for the country as well as for the individuals. The civilization is somewhat different here, each country has their own set of rules, Based on the clothes we can definitely say about the
person
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person's
 ability,
this
 is done
this
 is by means of the clothes which they wear
For instance
 pajama is worn by Indians only.
Likewise
, there are different countries around the world, each will have different types of clothes based on their art. The style can
also
 be said by their clothes, it is by the brilliance and their thoughts. Brilliance is like we can say if it is very hot outside, the person should wear lighter clothes. If it is cold, he should cover with tighter clothes. So at
last
 I agree with the
humor
ancient Greek epic poet who is believed to have written the Iliad and the Odyssey (circa 850 BC)
Homer
 say about the choice of clothes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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