With all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that space investigation has become an essential part of human life.

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, there is no absolute agreement,

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the funding

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kind of research is

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and should be allocated to

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things or not. Personally, I tend to think that it is more acceptable to continue financing the examination of the cosmos. First and foremost, it is well known that finding as much as possible about the universe outside of Earth may extend humans’ opportunities. What I mean here is that if scientists manifest more inhabitable locations which

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of water, food and other required resources, the state authorities will be able to transfer the half quantity of dwellers to other planets in the case of prohibitive overpopulation and battles for food and water. The explanation lies in the fact that currently scholars are providing the myriad of available data about their discoveries and explorations related to celestial bodies

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as stars, asteroids, meteors and

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about planets, which still have been examined by academics and colonists e.g. Since 2002 in Mars.

On the other hand

, it can be

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argued that calamities caused by the fall of asteroids or meteors are likely to be prevented by experts who thoroughly studied

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celestial objects or just to notify where

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disaster will probably occur. If there is not sufficient funding

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cosmic research

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the fact that people

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to spend money either on averting famine in poor countries, which

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clear evidence that a catastrophe is coming, or invention of unnecessary weapons, it might peril the safety of every inhabitant of Earth, including flora and fauna, and nobody will need to be fed.

Moreover

, the development of technology is partially owing to the immense curiosity of mankind, which is willing to comprehend everything. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned above into account, I completely disagree that financing the cosmic examination is

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, and the money ought to be allotted for

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as usual.