some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays youngsters are remained glued to technology due to
this
, reading and writing skills are declining among them. I partially agree with the
this
notion because the negative effects of
this
aspect can be revoked if technology should be used for only useful purposes.
using
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Using
technological equipment had an adverse effect on children's writing skills. When young people write
message
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messages
on
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to
each
other so, there
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other, so there
is
a
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an
automatic correction system available in the technological gadgets that's why they don't know when they write wrong word which create an adverse effect on their writing skills.
Instead
of
this
, they prefer to use short abbreviations while they use
facebook
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Facebook
,
whatsapp
like, 'lol' ok and many more.
Moreover, When
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When, moreover,
they try to use these words in school essays that are totally wrong.
these
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These
gadgets not only create bad effect on
writing but
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writing, but
reading skills are
also
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
. Nowadays children do not like to visit libraries and they do not have
keen interest
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a keen interest
towards reading material. They feel bored while reading. There will be a need of reading skills for
further
jobs.
Although
technology has negative effects, positive effects
can not
can not
cannot
be neglected. These days, there are numerous apps available on the smartphone and computers which can be used to create interest in reading among young people.To
examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
this
,
kindle
catch fire
Kindle
app which is available on the play store.
This
app
provide
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provides
a number of e books which youngsters choose according to their interest and read it without any cost. It helps to improve reading skills. Technology helps to become our life comfortable and
easier but
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easier, but
these technological equipment had some adverse effects if these gadgets used judiciously by young people, the bad effects of these gadgets can easily eradicate.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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