The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir,
The reason I am writing to you is an issue that our community “West Summer” is facing due to the faulty and inadequate
rubbish
management system, especially for the last
couple weeks
.
Let me elaborate on the situation. Change preposition
of weeks
First
of all, the number of garbage
bins
installed in the area is insufficient considering the total population. Furthermore
, for the fortnight, the garbage
collectors pick up the rubbish
only once in two days, instead
of picking it up on a daily basis.
Since the garbage
bins
are overflowing with litter, it attracts some street dogs and local citizens are worried about their safety. Moreover
, it has also
become a breeding ground for mosquitoes and other insects that can lead to the spread of contagious diseases. In addition
, a bad odour from rubbish
bins
reaches our houses and it makes unbearable
to breathe.
Considering all of the above-mentioned, as a long-term solution, more large Correct pronoun usage
it unbearable
garbage
bins
should be installed. Also
, garbage
collectors should pick up the rubbish
each day without any gaps.
I hope you will take immediate measures to solve the problems and suggestions will be considered.
Yours faithfully,
Kao MaoUnauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite