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Being a celebrity- such as famous film stars or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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It goes without saying that being a celebrity brings problems as well as benefits in an individual's heart. I believe that
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being a famous person comes
 with more problems than benefits and it requires a great and good mental health.
First
 of all, celebrities,
such
 as film stars or sports personalities are constantly followed by the media and they are not living a simple true life as a normal human being. They can’t go out to have a dinner unless their bodyguard is not with them, they can’t have a normal walk in a park because fans could be all over and ruin their personal leisure time.
Furthermore
, while one person is famous, he/she doesn’t have only fans, but enemies as well.
In addition
, celebrities can put their activity in danger if they show up alone without a supporting member of their staff.
Moreover
, it depends on their mental stability and how they cope with a situation, because negativity from others can have a bad impact on their well being and many artists or sport celebrities find salvation in drugs and alcohol.
On the other hand
, some people argue that being famous has many benefits
such
 as having a perfect life with money, everybody could wish for, extravagant holidays and doing nothing else just being present in the fans' life and giving them what they need: a good content, overwhelming music or even a good goal on the field.
Thus
, sometimes, the outsiders can not see the whole picture, and they imagine only the good parts. To sum up, I consider that famous person could have more problems with their lives at one point than benefits.
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