You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter Correct the information in the article Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
ear Sir/ Madam
My name is Shayan Jafari. I have been living in Sydney from my birth time like my ancestor and I know
this
city
better than anyone. I read an article in the last
version of your magazine
and I am writing to express my complain
about the wrong information which was written on that.
In the Replace the word
complaint
last
number of Add an article
the magazine
a magazine
Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
magazine
you wrote an article about a lake in the middle of Sydney. Unfortunately, I have to say that Add a comma
,magazine
lake
does not exist in the middle of Sydney. I have to say that Correct article usage
the lake
lake
Correct article usage
the lake
located
in the Add a missing verb
is located
suburb
area of the Replace the word
suburban
city
which you have to drive for 40 minutes to reach that place.
Needless to say that, this
city
is a destination for many tourists every each year and giving wrong information not only it
might mislead them in Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
city
, but also
decrease the satisfaction rate of your magazine
in the long-term.
Given the situation, I would like to suggest that, in new
version of your Add an article
the new
a new
magazine
you allocate some space to describe the mistake which happened in last
version and Change the article
the last
moreover
, apologize both
Change preposition
to both
citizen
of Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
city
and your readers.
Sincerely yours,
Shayan JafariAdd an article
the city
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite