IELTS Writing Tsk 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In poor families, teenagers may have to work part-time as well as study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this for these teenagers. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

There are a lot of poor families who send their children to work part

time

while studying. In needy families, juveniles may have jobs while they are still studying.

This

essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of teenagers who have jobs while they are studying. The major advantage of teenagers to have jobs while they are studying is

learned

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learning

to be independent and responsible.

For example

, the teenager must manage his

time

between studying and his job

this

help

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helps

him to be more culpable. Another example is the teenager should work and depend on his self without any help that makes him nonpartisan. On

other hand

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the other hand

, teenagers may not have enough

time

to study or hang out with friends

.

Accept space

.

It is hard

to

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for

them to find a

time

to study because they are busy with the job and that affect their

result

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results

in exams. They cannot hang out with friends

this

make them sad and lonely. In conclusion,

although

teenagers part

time

work while they are studying have a certain negative effect that they don’t have ample

time

to study or play with friends. It has a positive influence on a teenager ‘s

life it

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life, it

makes them autonomous and answerable.