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When travelling back home on the train last week you lost your wallet. The wallet contains some valuable things. In your letter, write to the Station Manager: say when and where you left your wallet describe the wallet and what was in it say how you will collect the wallet

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you as I have left my
wallet
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 on a
train
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 and would like it to be returned. The
wallet
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 was left on the 5.48 pm
train
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 on the City line travelling towards Beachside on Tuesday
last
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 week. I got on at City North and left the
train
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 at Downtown. I suspect the
wallet
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 fell out of my coat pocket as I was getting off the
train
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. My
wallet
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 is made of black leather with the logo “Armani” embossed on the front. It contains some important documents
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 as my driving licence and credit cards,
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 some family photographs that are of great personal value to me,
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 one of my late mother. I would be grateful if you would make enquiries into the whereabouts of the
wallet
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 and keep it for me. I can collect the
wallet
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 at the railway lost property office at the Downtown
train
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 station. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Andrew Moreton
Submitted by Darshita@8612 on

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complete response
Try to elaborate slightly more on how you'll confirm your identity when collecting the wallet to make the task completion even more comprehensive.
logical structure
The letter follows a clear and logical structure, detailing when and where the wallet was left, descriptions, and instructions for collection.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph discusses a single distinct idea, making the letter easy to follow.
suitable writing tone
The tone throughout the letter is polite and formal, perfectly fitting the context.
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